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I learned
this trick from my friend Björn Carlström, a producer, writer and director
in Stockholm, Sweden. It's a great trick for pacing your scenes, and
for avoiding the temptation to fill your script with a lot of cuts,
camera angles and directorial techniques that have no place in your
screenplay.
When you're writing
an action sequence that has no dialogue - a silent meal, a lovemaking
scene, a search, a fight, a car chase - write the first draft in one
long paragraph.
When you rewrite
it, imagine where, if you were directing or editing the film, you'd
put the cuts. In other words, where would you change camera shots within
the overall scene?
Every place you'd
cut the film, begin a new paragraph. By doing this, the pace of your
scene will match that of the movie. So a car chase made up of lots of
cuts will consist of very short paragraphs - sometimes only one or two
words -- and the reader will get through the page very quickly. A romantic
scene will have fewer cuts, the paragraphs will be longer, and the pace
will be slower.
Using this technique
also allows you to focus the reader's attention on specific objects
or actions without ever using camera directions like CLOSEUP, SMASH
CUT, or TRACKING SHOT - a mortal sin in a submission script. And using
this device over the entire script will magically insure that it conforms
to the one page = one minute formula.
If you don't believe
me, check it out. Read a script for an exciting, fast paced action film,
another for a romantic comedy, and another for a drama or love story.
Notice the lengths of the paragraphs, and how the differences in style
affect the pace and tone of the film.
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